To write a catchy, professional hook for a song, I start with a general theme, write the melody first and the lyrics second, and keep the melody simple enough for a stadium to chant. Then shape the words with object writing, metaphors, a title in a power position, repetition and prosody. That's exactly how I write mine.
So, you've got a great instrumental track waiting for a topline, but the hook just isn't quite there yet. Here's the process I use to write mine, from the first idea to the final check.
Quick intro if we haven't met: I'm Laurentius, professional music producer, songwriter and DJ from Zwolle. I've been releasing music since 2014 for major labels including Sony & Universal, and many independents record labels. My Laurentius releases have over 30 million streams, my full portfolio, including ghost productions and writing credits, is good for over 100 million streams on Spotify alone, and Muso.AI listed me as a Top 2% streamed songwriter of 2025. I don't sing into the microphone, but I can do everything else around a song.. or so I always say! Here's more about my background if you want to get to know my work!
Besides producing, I do topline writing for artists, producers and labels, and most of the lyric tools in my process come from a source I swear by: Writing Better Lyrics by Pat Pattison, the Berklee professor whose students include multi-Grammy-winning songwriters like Gillian Welch and John Mayer.
Contents
- What is a hook in a song?
- How to write a hook for a song: my songwriting process
- Step 1: Start with a general song theme
- Step 2: Melody first: how to write a catchy melody
- Step 3: How to write lyrics for a song with object writing
- Step 4: Use metaphors in songs instead of clichés
- Step 5: Put your song title in a power position
- Step 6: Check the prosody in music
- Ready to write a catchy hook?
- Frequently asked questions
What is a hook in a song?
A hook is the part of your song that grabs the listener's attention, and you usually keep repeating in your head after you've heard it. You can view it as a device in music or writing that captures and delivers the attention. This can be a melody, a lyric line, or even an instrumental hook. In So Amazing, my record with Belle Humble, the hook is instrumental. But in my song Lightning, with DT James, it's a vocal choir.
In this blog, I share my secrets on writing vocal hooks. Let's create the best melodies, with the catchiest words you put on it.
How to write a hook for a song: my songwriting process
This is my process, in the order I work:
- Start with a general theme to write about.
- Write or hum a melody that fits the instrumental.
- Find words though object writing.
- Swap out clichés for unique metaphors.
- Put the title in a power position, and repeat it.
- Check the prosody (does your music feel like your words?)
Step 1: Start with a general song theme
Before I write the melody, I usually have a general theme in mind. It doesn't have to be final, and it can still change down the line. That's fine, because a theme is only there to point your melody and your first words in a creative direction. I always determine a fitting theme for myself first.
When working with a specific briefing, sometimes a theme is already handed to you. Can You Hear Me, my record with KULI, is the official World Hearing Day 2025 anthem for the World Health Organization, so the theme was clear, and I wrote the full lyrics around it from a personal journey of learning to accept hearing loss and finding strength from within to make it your strength.
Step 2: Melody first: how to write a catchy melody
For me, a melody comes first and the lyrics second. And every melody I write has to pass a test that Sam Feldt shared with me in the studio once. It really stuck with me, and I live by it to this day:
"If you can imagine a stadium full of drunk sports fans chanting your melody easily, or even making up their own lyrics to it, it's a strong melody. Otherwise, it's too complicated."
A great example of this test, is the 'Will Grigg's on Fire' chant. A Wigan Athletic fan turned Gala's 1996 dance hit 'Freed from Desire' into a viral chant about their striker Will Grigg, and Northern Ireland fans, or even the entire world, sang it throughout Euro 2016. Now, that's what I call the stadium test in full action! The melody was simple enough for a whole stadium to sing, and strong enough that fans wrote their own words to it.
So, hum your melody to someone without any words. If you can't picture a stadium chanting it back to you, simplify it until you can. Don't overcomplicate things when you don't have to, is my vision.
Step 3: How to write lyrics for a song with object writing
Once your melody works, it needs words that make your listener see and feel something. You're behind the wheel of their listening journey. This is where object writing comes in, an exercise from the same book again. The rules are as follows:
- Pick a real object at random, and focus all you main senses on it. (Seeing, Hearing, Smelling, Tasting and Feeling)
- Set a timer and write for strictly ten minutes, ideally first thing in the morning when your mind is still not full from living though a new day.
- Now use all seven senses: sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch, organic (your awareness of what goes on inside your body) and kinesthetic (your sense of relation to the world around you).
- Stay sense-bound. Write what your senses pick up, and make your listener exactly how you experience these senses.
- Do this exercise every day, for at least six weeks. You'll make incredible progress in writing and finding unique themes quickly.
The pages you write give you perfect starting points to pick your hook from, and to fit onto your melody. When you're feeling uninspired, read through these and re-experience these exercises, it works like magic!
Step 4: Use metaphors in songs instead of clichés
A hook has to grab the attention. And a sentence or word your listener has heard a hundred times won't do that, usually. My method is to swap clichés for fresh and unique metaphors. You can categorise those in three types:
- Expressed identity: two nouns stated as the same thing, for example "fear is a shadow".
- Qualifying: an adjective qualifies a noun, or an adverb qualifies a verb, like "velvet skies".
- Verbal: the verb interacts with its subject or object, like "clouds sail".
When a line in your hook feels too flat or generic, check which of the three you could use to make it unique.
Step 5: Put your song title in a power position
The strongest spots in a section are called 'power positions', usually the first or the last line. That's where a title usually belongs. First, last, or both. Short titles make that easy. Think of So Amazing or Can You Hear Me: two or three words you can sing straight back.
Then repeat it. Your title comes back in every chorus, so give your verses the job of moving it forward. Every verse should add weight, so your chorus means a little more each time it returns. A quick check: read your chorus again after every verse. If the chorus means exactly the same thing the third time as the first, your verses need some more work.
Step 6: Check the prosody in music
Prosody is how well your music fits what your words are saying. Your melody, your rhythm and your production should all support the meaning of your hook.
Weird Games, my record with James Stefano, is about manipulation, someone playing strange mind games. So the whole record is built to make you feel exactly this. The song features an uneasy atmosphere, an off-kilter guitar rhythm and a whistle hook I played myself translate that unease, rather than just describing it.
Play your hook back and ask yourself: does the music feel like what the words say?
Ready to write a catchy hook?
Now you have my full hook process, from the theme to secret tricks and the final check. My advice to you is to start object writing tomorrow morning, and run every melody through my 'stadium test' before you write a single word.
ow that you can write hooks on a high level, you deserve an award-level production around it too! Check out my production, mixing and songwriting services. Working on a full record? Here's how working with me as your producer goes. I do topline writing for artists, producers and labels myself, but if you've written your own and need a production or a vocal mix around it, I'm also available for hire.
Got the hook recorded and are now ready to mix your vocals? Here's my full vocal chain, with every setting. Sending a topline to a producer instead? Here's how to deliver stems like the professionals.
And once your track is finished, please send it over, because I'm always looking for new music to play in my live DJ sets!